Last Tear
Across the hall is where I stayWiping those dreadful tears awayBut who shall comeis the one I seekwaiting for him every weekwaiting till there is no moretill they shut the big brass doorLife will come...
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If you want to be a poet you must come up with language that is not trite or hackneyed. There are many other ways to state your feelings. "Wiping tears away" and "waiting for him" has been said...
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hey! Thank you for the advice I really like how you symbolized the tombstone... I will try that! Its much more creative than what i had... I like what you said about the oaken box. Thank you I will...
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